The little lemon craft that saled the sea at night

The little lemon craft that saled the sea at night.

Long a go there was

a little lemon craft

that sailed  the sea at night

and crosed that land in night

The story mays moving

and beautifull ad the moon;

but it will end up soon

because it just a pudding

Passage-based Essay

In Literature, we've been working with the story "A pudding like a night in the sea" from the book Snapshots. After we read it, we had to work in pairs choosing one of three writing tasks. My mate and I chose the passage-based essay. Our teacher gave us a part of the story to work with.

In our opinion the author makes this such a powerful moment by describing certain details like "His voice went through every crack and corner of the house" and in this way we know how the characters feel in that moment. The fact that the author describes this details about the volume of the voice and exagerates how it reverberated, helps us to imagine exactly what happened. The description of attitudes, feelings, behaviours are very important so that we can, in a way, "enter" or be part of those important moments of a story.

The author also uses similes and comparisons like "there was his face, and his eyes like black lightning" so that we can know or imagine the situation and how much, in this case angry, the character was. We can also know how nervous the kids were because of their attitudes towards their father when he enters the room. They were so nervous that they started lieing. For example "We went outside, and when we came back the pudding was gone!"

In conclusion, the author gives power to this part of the story by giving key details about attitudes, the tone of the voice and some feelings Huey and Julian showed towards their strict dad.

Texto Argumentativo

Em la clase de lengua con la profesora Eliana Gallego, estamos trabajando con textos argumentativos, por eso tuvimos que leer un cuento y hacer una descripción sobre los personajes del cuento "Cuento de Horror".Este trabajo era en parejas, y ami me toco con Augusto Zacagnino, el personaje que tuve que describir se llama Euphemia Smithson, ademas tuvimos que hacer un mensaje de este personaje, animarlo con voki.com y subirlo a nuestros bloggers.







La señora Euphemia Smithson, de aproximadamente 70 años de edad. Después de 50 años de matrimonio deicidio matar a su marido por el echo de que estaba harta de el.
Esta mujer llevaba puesto un camisón negro hasta los talones, unas pantuflas todas despeluchadas y tambien usaba un bastón que lo utilizaba como soten. Era tan ingenua que le advertía a su marido, como y cuando lo iba a matar.Era una mujer de pelo negro y largo hasta la cintura, un grano demasiado peludo, los dientes amarillos de tanto fumar. Tenia una voz muy gruesa y con acento español